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I have an overwelming love for art, writing and thearte. i love color yet im still working out my flaws. I desplay my work here for people who could posible enjoy them and i will take critsizm from those who dont

Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Writing idea NEED COMENTS!!


Chapter 1; thoughts of a wicked mind
           
Her life was taken, a single bullet encased in her bloody chest. Her white shirt stained red as the wine on our wedding day. Her future was wiped clean by those monsters that envied her success. Her body trembled as she struggled to breathe. In her face I saw that each strained movement caused her immense agony.
            “Lie still sweetie” I said through heavy tears, “you’ll be all right “I knew I was fooling myself I knew she was dying and I knew denying would only make me suffer. For now that didn’t matter I had to give her hope even if I had none to offer.
            “I love you” she mouthed, unable to speak. I had never felt pain as this before. It was as if a piece of me was missing. My crying became sobbing as her eyes rolled in the back of her head. Her skin was so pale it could not be described as any other color but death. The pool of blood around us grew as the life flowed from the wound. Christine took her last breath, and I could feel my heart dying with hers. I let out a cry of grief, and longing to go wherever she had went. This longing dug so deep it penetrated my very soul. I gently set my wife’s body down and retrieved the pistol that had taken this beautiful woman away from me. The metal was cold in my unsteady hand. My breath began to slow. I turned towards Christine and held the gun to my temple.
            “I can’t live without you, see you in heaven my love “I instantly pulled the trigger. I felt no pain, no grief, no sorrow, just darkness.
            I woke up in a dim place, surely heaven isn’t this dark. I get up and I hear something crunching under my feet. I walked a while looking for some clue as to where I was at  “Christine” I called “Christine”  no matter how many times I called she wouldn’t answer. After what seemed like walking for ages, I came across two giant archways that illuminated the area. I was standing on bones, bloody human bodys caked in masses of blood. Massive piles of body’s surrounded me each bleeding and deformed. Some twitched in anguish and tried to grab my ankles. As I attempted to get away but they pulled me down into the sea of blood. They held me just above the surface as I struggled against them. Through the first archway appeared an angel. She was draped in golden robes and her long curly hair fell down her back. When she got closer I realized who she was, Christine
            “Christine, help….please” I begged struggling against the grotesque creatures holding me back. She held up her hand and whispered something I could not hear. The bloody body released me and I swam to the surface.
            “This is wonderful, to see you…you……not dead” I choked up on my words not knowing what to say to such an angelic face. Her face turned stone cold and her eyes icy
            “I have made it to heaven” she says smoothly “but you have committed the ultimate sin. We cannot reside together” it didn’t even seem that she cared.
            The second archway became engulfed in flame. Christine’s chest began to bleed as if something was forcing its way out of her body. Black bloody hand began ripping away her soft beautiful skin revealing rippling muscles and veins .I cried out wanting it to stop. I had no desire to see anymore. Whatever was inside her was increasing in size and violently thrashing to get out. Emerging from what was once the most beautiful woman I had ever laid eyes on seemed to be a burned two leg, winged creature. Its skin was the color of scarlet with black burns and wounds. The thing had a flat face and pure black eyes. It had a smirk on its face as if it enjoyed the fear I was feeling. I was stuck I could not physically move which only added to my rising fear. I struggled against the power that bonded me and fell over unable to return to my feet.
            The creature must have stood about eight feet tall. From the ground it seemed even taller. It stood over me and chuckled, as the ground engulfed in flames. I screamed out in agony, but the creature merely laughed. I wished to die but I knew I was already there. I could only hope for mercy as the fire pierced my body. The pain only intensified the harder I struggled, and cried out. The creature turned and spoke in a taunting voice. “You might know me as satin, welcome to hell”
            Three long years, 400 twisted psychotic pages, and it was finished. I had a good feeling this would be my bestselling novel yet. The more grotesque my work gets the more my readers divulge into the depths of my mind. The pages full of the dreams that have haunted me for a life time were now in brilliant vivid detail. I just knew the completion of a new masterpiece would only ensue a new recurring nightmare.
            I’ve always wondered what people would think of me if they knew I actually seen these images in my head. It’s amazing that I haven’t already been sent to an intuition.   
            I stand up only to fall back into my desk chair, four hours of typing will do that. I stretch my stiff legs and hobble to the kitchen. After eating I decide to lie down. I am lulled to sleep by simple thoughts of another bestselling book.
            A foggy mist covered the freshly cut grass that felt soft on my bare feet. There was a slight chill that made me shiver. In my head I felt the need to keep walking but I sensed nothing good was going to be at my destination. The fog began to twist and swirl in the breeze. It eventually took the shape of a woman who looked disgruntled and tired. The woman looked at me with cold eyes and let out a scream that I felt could split my very skull. I couldn’t see  as the fog crowded around me.
            “You killed her, she was my baby,” she wailed. I covered my ears until I realized the screaming was in my head.
            “What…I didn’t…please!” I begged for the torment to end
            “Liar, filthy liar…my baby, my baby” she cried. Her shrieks grew louder with each word. Each sentence was filled with agony and pain, a mother without her child. She was so desperate and distraught. The screams became unbearable.
            I sat strait up in bed realizing that the screams were my own. My heart pounded as beads of sweat poured down my face. I began to wonder if this was the new vision that would soon haunt me every time I closed my eyes.
             I took the small booklet laying on my bedside table to write down the dream. I laid back down in an attempt to go to sleep but I couldn’t help to think, what happened to that child? It sounded like the most stupid thing I could have ever asked myself. It was all just a dream right? All my other dreams just caused pain to me, never anybody else. Why would it all of a sudden change? The unanswered questions kept me awake for hours.  Once I fall asleep I am only woken by the screams of the mother. The dream made no sense but it would make one great novel if I just knew more.
About the fifth time the misty-eyed and desperate woman awoke me my head ached from her pleading cries. This had changed everything I had ever known about my abnormal nightmares. Over the years I had gotten used to my own subconscious agony. Watching someone else in pain was a new and horrible torture, yet I couldn’t help but to be thankful it wasn’t me who was in pain. In a way it was a nice change. She clearly never existed so no one was in agony which justified my terrible thoughts. At least that’s what I told myself.  I gave up on my hopeless quest for a solid slumber. I sighed, for what was there to do at four in the morning but start on the daily house work.
I began by striping the bed and washing the lavender sheets. I moved downstairs to the bright and spotless kitchen and scrubbed it until it reeked with bleach and chemicals. In my living room I vacuumed, dusted and washed the four large windows. I beat the old red velvet cushions as well as the floor rug that resided on the hardwood. Next I sweep the elegant entrance hallway by the large staircase. It had posts of dark cherry wood and rails of marble white. Paintings were strung about the high walls giving life to the elaborate home.
No one could question I was a clean freak, nor could I deny it. By the time I perfected my already spotless home it was nearing noon. I now believed I had the capability to face my thoughts. I walked to the back of the grand Victorian house to a large room which contained an art studio. It was filled with canvas, paint seven easels and one solitary stool. I breathed in the smell of the plaster and oil smiling at the peace it gave me. The paintings up front contained the images of my most recent work. The first large paintings contained the two large gates that I was positive represented heaven and hell. The first had a golden glow that had an essence of peace as you focused on it. It had carvings of Jesus and all stories’ surrounding the traditional religion. Many angels climbed up its tall large sides expanding above the archway creating a curtain of beauty around the center.
The second arch had no glow but was carved with shining representation of purgatory in a metallic red color. It would induce fear into anyone who stared into its dark depths.
I painted each gate several times, each one gaining detail as my dreams progressed.  The canvas gave a firsthand look straight into my minds vision. I gather my materials and sit down on my stool. I swirl silver, white and ashy colors to form the mist that soon shaped the distressed woman. Her wild chestnut hair formed loosely around her tear socked face. Highlights were used to bring out the true terror in her face. Her forehead creased with worry on her pale ivy skin. Her white floor length night gown was splotched red with splattered blood. Stepping back from the painting I began to wonder whose blood was it, hers or her daughters?
 Only another night of torment would reveal any more clues as to what happened to the woman. I now was positive this will make a killer novel once all the pieces are in place. I rub my eyes with exhaustion from my previous choppy sleep and cleaning spree.
Standing from my stool the woman’s eyes plead to me it was almost impossible to turn away from them. Almost. I hurried to the kitchen before the eyes could catch me in its compelling grip. I couldn’t understand why this dream was so much more real than all the rest. It stuck out in my mind more than meeting satin face to face. I tend to do that a lot. The smell of chemicals filled my nose as I walked in. to most people it would have burned the eyes and throat but to me it smelled clean and inviting. I grab an apple from an organized drawer in the pantry, savoring its ripe and crisp taste.
I follow the hallway into my office. A single computer sat on the desk along with a small cup of pens. I quickly walk over to it and replace the pen that still remained on the dark wood. I place it carefully making sure the cap was pointing up. I straitened some scattered papers before I declared the room appropriate to work.
I open up my email and send a message to Mary Tolken, my chubby classy publisher.
Dear Mary              
I have completed my novel Depths of the Devil, and would love to schedule a meeting with you to discuss terms of publishing.
Sincerely
Chastity Greyland
I started to delete my junk mail, mostly from fans that I cared nothing about, when I stopped at a very unusual one.  Giving the kind of messed up ligature I write it isn’t strange to receive out of the ordinary messages from fans that I assume are just as psychotic as me. But this one stuck out like a sore thumb. The sender was a girl named Kaitlin Divine, and the subject was a single word that made my heart leap out of my chest, Dreams. I very hesitantly opened the email.
Dear Chastity Greyland,
My name is Kaitlin Divine; I don’t intend to beat around the bush per say so I’m going to tell you strait out what I think. I share your curse of your recurring nightmares. I personally was hoping to find a way to stop them and I don’t know who to turn to please respond back. I’d like to know I’m not crazy.
            I gaped at the computer open mouthed and nearly choked. Anybody standing around would have thought I was suffering from a heart attack. It made her almost angry that someone knew. She never voiced her thoughts they stayed in her head. I was now fuming. These crazy, demented dreams are how I make living without them I would live in a box not my grandmothers mansion. The bitch has some nerve to assume I would want to be rid of these dreams. I picked up the jar of pens and smashed it against the wall. I busy myself picking up each of the glass shards. My anger was bubbling and attempted to boil over. Ding, the computer rang out in the silent room.
“Shut up!” I screamed at it, losing my voice in the process. Immediately I start laughing at myself. I find myself on the floor curled up in a ball. I had completely lost it.  My hysterics lasted round about fifteen minutes. I managed to pull my small body up into my chair and open the email.
            Dear Chastity,
I am immensely pleased to hear you have finished another novel. I would be delighted to have you at my office on Wednesday at seven in the evening. With that said as usual I’m going to need a manuscript to preview.
            Sincerely Mary Tolken
CEO, Tolken and Works publishing
            The message seemed to temporally calm my rampage. I only had to wait for two days to be validated that I had wonderful writing ability’s. Not to mention I was absolutely insane thinking up such a demonic plotline. I gave myself a grin for those were the two facts about me I loved to hear from others. My smile widened. I slid my hands through my curls letting my thoughts wander this was going to be a great meeting. This Kaitlin girl would not fuck this up; I was not crazy I was meant to have these dreams. I was destined to write these novels.
            My day passed with the normal cleaning laundry and uneventful stupor it usually held. I printed the long 400 page manuscript, which took most of the day and three cartridges of ink. My true interest was in my nightmare tonight and what kind of novel it would turn out to be.
            Finally it was an acceptable time to get ready for bed. I ready myself by putting on my knee long white satin nightgown and detangling my dark red curls. I took some unnecessary Benadryl to insure a complete and novel worthy dream.
            I turn down the bed and lay motionless, waiting for the drugs to take hold of my consciousness. I roll over to get comfortable to come face to face with a young girl. I sat strait up, startled by her presence. Her chestnut hair fell over her face. She pushed it out of her face to unveil her piercing blue eyes.
“Hi” she smiled an innocent little smile.
“Hello?” I said after a short pause. She didn’t seem to notice that she was lying in some strange woman’s bed, which happened to be staring at her like she had three heads. “Umm….. Who are you?” I cautiously asked.
“You’re silly, you know me.” She giggled. Her eyes told me that she truly believed I knew her. Her eyes got sad “you do remember me, don’t you Chastity”.
I shook my head slowly, staring at her with curiosity. “You said we were friends” I was speechless as her eyes welled with tears. She opened her mouth and let out a scream that echoed in my head. Knowing that it was a dream the screaming didn’t bother me. In a way, it comforted me that I wasn’t in pain for once. Besides I hate kids, they whine.
What did bother me however was how familiar she looked to me. I was sure I had seen her before. Her tantrum ended with the world falling out from under me. I felt a cold rush of wind rush past me as I fell. It felt good, it felt free.
After what seemed like a long decent my feet hit ground and my head collided with my table. Thunk, I lifted my hand to my head in pain. The clock stated that I had slept all night while eating my dinner. I felt refreshed and energetic despite my stiff back. I take a hot shower letting the hot water run over my naked body. The heat untangled my muscles that had been so unwilling to unclench. Maybe that’s what I get for spending the night in a wooden chair. My spotless home beckoned to be clean after my shower, and got to work appeasing its desire for perfection

Friday, June 8, 2012

people study

this was just a sketch to pass time in the process of studying methods of figure drawing. I find  it is more frustrating than it seems.

Thursday, June 7, 2012

Achivment

I can now say i am an official member of the international thespian honor society. im excited and have found a new love for theartere.

Monday, April 16, 2012

Shakesphere inspration

I have found a new love for Shakespeare. Now that i finaly read hamelt theres alot going through my head, although if  translate anymore old time english in the next fourty-eight hours my brain might explode. Instead of reading anymore of Romeo and Juliet, i looked up paintings inspired by Shakepeare's many plays. you'd be suprised what comes up. I highly recomend  it to litature fans.

"For never was a story of greater woe
Than this of Juliet and her Romeo"

Saturday, March 24, 2012

My vampire aunt


the picture started as my aunt erin, but i happend to be watching twilight new moon . so she became a vampire